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Midwest bundles up as bitter cold grips region

Ice crystals form frost on the window of a home in Medina, Minn. as the area experiences subzero temperatures on Monday, Jan. 21, 2013. (AP Photo/The Star Tribune, Richard Sennott)

Ice crystals form frost on the window of a home in Medina, Minn. as the area experiences subzero temperatures on Monday, Jan. 21, 2013. (AP Photo/The Star Tribune, Richard Sennott)

University of Wisconsin-Madison student Marisa Weich contends with sub-zero wind chill temperatures while making her way to class on the campus Tuesday, Jan. 22, 2013. (AP Photo/Wisconsin State Journal, John Hart)

Fog forms over Lake Superior on Monday, Jan. 21, 2013, along the Duluth, Mich. shoreline as the area experiences subzero temperatures. (AP Photo/The Duluth News-Tribune, Bob King)

Commuters bundle up against extreme cold conditions Tuesday, Jan. 22, 2013, in Chicago. Temperatures in the area were hovering around zero with sub-zero wind chill reading hitting 10 below. Forecasters say waves of frigid Arctic air began moving over the region Saturday night Jan. 19, 2013. Temperatures are expected to rebound Wednesday Jan. 23, 2013. (AP Photo/M. Spencer Green)

A Commuter bundles up against extreme cold conditions Tuesday, Jan. 22, 2013, in Chicago. Temperatures in the area were hovering around zero with sub-zero wind chill reading hitting 10 below. Forecasters say waves of frigid Arctic air began moving over the region Saturday night Jan. 19, 2013. Temperatures are expected to rebound Wednesday Jan. 23, 2013. (AP Photo/M. Spencer Green)

MADISON, Wis. (AP) ? Homeless people scrambled to find shelter, schools closed down and plumbers wrestled with frozen pipes Tuesday as the Upper Midwest endured a third straight day of bitter cold temperatures.

Waves of frigid Arctic air began sweeping south from Canada on Saturday night, locking the Midwest in a deep freeze that has left a section of the country well-acquainted with winter's pains reeling. Authorities suspect exposure has played a role in at least four deaths so far.

"I am wearing a Snuggie under a top and another jacket over that," said Faye Whitbeck, president of the chamber of commerce in International Falls, Minn., a town near the Canadian border where the temperature was minus 30 on Tuesday morning. The so-called "Nation's Icebox" reached a balmy 3 below for a high. "I pulled out a coat that went right to my ankles this morning and I wore two scarves."

The coldest location in the lower 48 states Monday was Embarrass, Minn., at 36 below. On Sunday it was Babbitt, Minn., at 29 below, according to the National Weather Service. The bitter conditions were expected to persist into the weekend in the Midwest through the eastern half of the U.S., said Shawn DeVinny, a National Weather Service meteorologist in suburban Minneapolis.

Ariana Laffey, a 30-year-old homeless woman, kept warm with a blanket, three pairs of pants and six shirts as she sat on a milk crate begging near Chicago's Willis Tower on Tuesday morning. She said she and her husband spent the night under a bridge, bundled up under a half-dozen blankets.

"We're just trying to make enough to get a warm room to sleep in tonight," Laffey said.

But in Sioux Falls, S.D., where winter temperatures are normally well below freezing, some homeless shelters had open beds. Shelter managers suspect people who needed a place to stay were already using the services before the temperatures reached more extreme lows. The first cold snap of the season was in early December. Overnight temperatures dropped to 9 below with the wind chill. In Vermillion, S.D., a water pipe break forced the evacuation of a dormitory at the University of South Dakota, with nearly 500 students offered hotel rooms.

In Michigan's Upper Peninsula, residents woke to a wind chill that made it feel like 35 below. The temperature in Madison, Wis., was a whopping 1 degree above just before midday Tuesday. For northern Illinois, it was the first time in almost two years that temperatures had dipped below zero.

The temperature in Detroit was a toasty 7 degrees with a 10 below wind chill around midday. City officials said they planned to extend hours at its two warming centers. A warming center run by St. Peter and Paul Jesuit Church downtown that usually sees 50 to 60 people on a typical winter day had taken in about 90 people Tuesday morning.

Police in Milwaukee, where the temperature was just 2 degrees at noon, checked under freeway overpasses to find the homeless and urge them to find a shelter. The United Way of Greater Milwaukee has donated $50,000 to two homeless shelters so they can open overflow centers.

"We're incredibly relieved," said Donna Rongholt-Migan, executive director of the Cathedral Center, a Milwaukee shelter that received $25,000. "I was walking my dog last night and I couldn't feel my legs just after walking around the block."

Schools across the region either started late or didn't open at all. Districts in Duluth, Minn., and Ashland, Bayfield, Hurley, Washburn and Superior in far northern Wisconsin closed amid warnings that the wicked wind chills could freeze exposed flesh within a minute.

"It's brutal," Courtney Thrall, a 21-year-old University of Wisconsin-Madison student, said as she waited for her bus, her fur-trimmed parka hood pulled over her head.

On Sunday, a 70-year-old man was found frozen in his unheated home in Des Plaines, Ill. And in Green Bay, Wis., a 38-year-old man was found dead outside his home Monday morning. Authorities in both cases said the victims died of hypothermia and cold exposure, with alcohol a possible contributing factor.

A 77-year-old Illinois woman also was found dead near her car in southwestern Wisconsin on Saturday night, and a 61-year-old Minnesota man was pronounced dead at a hospital after he was found in a storage building Saturday morning.

The plunging temperatures made life plenty miserable for plumbers.

Workers in Madison had to repair at least four water main breaks since Sunday afternoon. Jim Gilchrist, a third-generation plumber in the Chicago suburb of Oak Park, said he received about five or six calls Tuesday from people with frozen water pipes in their homes. Few pipes had actually burst ? yet.

"We'll probably get those calls later, as pipes begin thawing" and develop a split, Gilchrist said. "Today they just know they don't have water; tomorrow they will have water spraying."

At least two fires in southern Wisconsin were blamed on property owners using heaters or other means to thaw frozen pipes. In one case, a dairy barn was destroyed, and in the other, a mobile home was lost. No one was hurt.

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Associated Press writers Doug Glass in Minneapolis, Don Babwin and Tammy Webber in Chicago, Jeff Karoub in Detroit, Dirk Lammers in Sioux Falls, S.D., and Dinesh Ramde and Gretchen Ehlke in Milwaukee contributed to this report.

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French: Turkish suspect probed in Kurd killings

PARIS (AP) ? French prosecutors have filed preliminary murder and terrorism charges against a Turkish citizen who worked as a driver for one of three Kurdish activists who were gunned down this month in Paris, an official said Monday.

The suspect, identified as Omer Guney, 30, drove for the most prominent victim, Sakine Cansiz, a woman in her 50s who helped found the Kurdistan Workers Party, or PKK, a rebel group seeking autonomy for Turkey's Kurds. Guney has told investigators he has been a member of the PKK for two years, Prosecutor Francois Molins told reporters.

There is "serious and corroborating evidence" to show that Guney had a role in the Jan. 9 killings, Molins said.

The preliminary charges of murder in connection with a terrorist operation and conspiracy in connection with a terrorist operation were filed against Guney, who is being detained, Molins said. This opens the way to a fuller investigation which would lead to formal charges, if sufficient evidence is found. If there is not enough evidence to support suspicions, the preliminary charges will be dropped.

Guney maintains his innocence.

The conflict in Turkey between the PKK and government forces has claimed tens of thousands of lives since 1984. Recently, Turkish officials have been holding talks with the PKK in an effort to persuade it to disarm. And Turkey's government has said those opposed to such talks may have been involved in the Paris killings.

Molins said video cameras show that Guney was inside the Kurdish Information Center in the 10th district of Paris on Jan. 9 at the time investigators believe the killings occurred there: between 12:43 p.m. and 1:21 p.m. The prosecutor said 10 shots were fired ? four into the head of one of the victims and three into the heads of the other two.

Murder weapons have not been found, but investigators believe only one was used in the attack. The investigators say they found a bag in Guney's car that had traces of gun powder on it, and that police say the bag may have been carrying a gun.

Video evidence from a nearby store, a parking garage and elsewhere shows Guney entering the Kurdish Information Center with Cansiz at 11:29 a.m. He left briefly to return to a nearby parking garage and was seen returning to the center at 12:11 p.m., the prosecutor said. Guney was in the center, where the bodies were found for about 45 minutes, leaving at 12:56 p.m., Molins said.

Investigators place the time of deaths at between 12:43 p.m. and 1:21 p.m.

When confronted with the video evidence of his presence at the center, Guney initially told police he had "forgotten" to tell them he had returned to the center, Molins. Later, Guney claimed the videotapes must have been manipulated, according to the prosecutor.

The other two victims were identified as Leyla Soylemez and Fidan Dogan, Kurdish activists in their 20s.

Many Kurds flocked to Paris from Germany and Turkey to mourn the deaths of the three women.

Source: http://news.yahoo.com/french-turkish-suspect-probed-kurd-killings-170205984.html

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Hundreds attend NYC memorial for Internet activist Aaron Swartz

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Supporters of Aaron Swartz, the 26-year-old Internet activist who committed suicide last week, gathered in New York to remember the computer prodigy on Saturday, with some calling for changes in the criminal justice system they blame for his death.

Swartz, who at 14 helped create an early version of the Web feed system RSS and believed the fruits of academic research and other information should be freely available to all, was found dead a week ago in his Brooklyn apartment.

The city's chief medical examiner ruled the death a suicide by hanging.

He had been facing trial on federal charges he used the Massachusetts Institute of Technology's computer networks to steal more than 4 million articles from JSTOR, an online archive and journal distribution service.

Swartz, who had also worked on the popular website Reddit, had faced a maximum sentence of 31 years in prison and fines of up to $1 million.

"He told me about the 4.5 million downloads of scholarly articles, and my first thought was why isn't MIT celebrating this?" Edward Tufte, an emeritus professor of computer science at Yale University and a friend of Swartz, said to applause from the crowd gathered in The Cooper Union's Great Hall in Manhattan.

Taren Stinebrickner-Kauffman, Swartz's partner, criticized what she described as MIT's "indifference" to the saga, saying the school could have acted to end his prosecution.

The president of MIT said this week the school was investigating its role in Swartz's case. JSTOR has said in a statement it settled any dispute with Swartz in 2011 and praised his "important contributions to the development of the Internet."

Call?for change
At the memorial, attended by hundreds of friends and supporters, the strongest criticisms were reserved for prosecutors in the office of Carmen Ortiz, the U.S. Attorney for Massachusetts.

Roy Singham, the chairman of ThoughtWorks, a software consultancy firm where Swartz worked, called the case against Swartz "an abuse of state power" intended to intimidate Swartz. He called for the reform of the Computer Fraud and Abuse Act under which Swartz was prosecuted.

Swartz's partner said it all became too much for him to bear.

"He was so scared and so frustrated and more than anything so weary I just don't think he could take it another day," Stinebrickner-Kauffman said, adding the pair had discussed getting married after the trial.

Ortiz has defended her office's actions, saying prosecutors "took on the difficult task of enforcing a law they had taken an oath to uphold, and did so reasonably."

She said they offered Swartz a deal to plead guilty to multiple counts of wire fraud and computer fraud and spend six months at a low-security facility.

Swartz was remembered as a precocious talent who began addressing technology conferences as a teenager and whose quirks included being loath to wash his dishes and preferring bland foods like crackers and white rice.

Many speakers said he was by far the smartest and most intellectually curious person they had known, and called on those in attendance to continue his work of trying to widen the public's access to information and communication channels.

Stinebrickner-Kauffman said Swartz disliked grand ceremonies and would have been uncomfortable with some aspects of his own memorial.

"But memorial services are for the living," she said, repeating it several times like a mantra, "and last Friday he forfeited his right to decide that."

(Editing by Cynthia Johnston and Xavier Briand)

Copyright 2013 Thomson Reuters.

Source: http://www.nbcnews.com/technology/technolog/hundreds-attend-nyc-memorial-internet-activist-aaron-swartz-1B8039397

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Obama sworn in for four more years in office

WASHINGTON (AP) ? Stepping into his second term, President Barack Obama took the oath of office Sunday in an intimate swearing-in ceremony at the White House, the leader of a nation that, while no longer in the throes of the recession he inherited four years ago, remains deeply divided.

The president, surrounded by family in the ornate White House Blue Room, was administered the oath by Chief Justice John Roberts. With Obama's hand resting on a Bible used for years by Michelle Obama's family, the president vowed "to support and defend the Constitution of the United States," echoing the same words spoken by the 43 men who held the office before him.

"I did it," Obama whispered to his youngest daughter, Sasha, as he wrapped her in a hug moments later.

The president said the oath in just minutes before noon on Jan. 20, the time at which the Constitution says new presidential terms begin. There was little pomp and circumstance Sunday ? Obama walked into the room flanked by his family and exited almost immediately after finishing the oath.

He'll repeat the swearing-in ritual again Monday on the west front of the Capitol before a crowd of up to 800,000 people.

Only about a dozen family members were on hand to witness Sunday's swearing in, including the first lady, daughters Malia and Sasha, the president's sister, Maya Soetoro-Ng, and her family. Mrs. Obama's mother, Marian Robinson, and the first lady's brother, Craig Robinson, and his family were also on hand, along with a few reporters and photographers.

Yet the mood in the nation's capital was more subdued during this year's inaugural festivities than it was four years ago, when Obama swept into office on a wave of national optimism, becoming the first African-American to hold the nation's highest office. Since then, he has endured fiscal fights with Congress and a bruising re-election campaign ? and has the gray hair and lower approval ratings to show for it.

Ahead of his swearing-in Sunday, Obama, along with Vice President Joe Biden, solemnly honored the nation's fallen soldiers during a wreath-laying ceremony at Arlington National Cemetery. On a crisp, sun-splashed morning, Obama and Biden placed a large wreath adorned with red, white and blue ribbon, in front of Arlington's Tomb of the Unknowns. Holding their hands over their hearts, the two leaders stood motionless as a bugler played "Taps."

From Arlington, Obama joined his family at a church service celebrating Martin Luther King Jr. The president's public swearing-in on Monday coincides with the national holiday marking the fallen civil rights leader's birthday, and Obama has invoked King's memory throughout the lead-up to the inauguration.

The Rev. Jonathan V. Newton, an assistant pastor at Metropolitan African Methodist Episcopal Church, prayed for God to prepare Obama for battle, "because sometimes enemies insist on doing it the hard way."

Biden took the oath of office earlier in the morning, surrounded by family and friends for a brief ceremony at the Naval Observatory, his official residence in northwest Washington. Justice Sonia Sotomayor, appointed by Obama as the first Hispanic to serve on the Supreme Court, administered the oath of office to Biden, who placed his hand on a Bible his family has used since 1893.

Among the 120 guests on hand to witness the vice president's second swearing-in were Attorney General Eric Holder, departing Interior Secretary Ken Salazar and several Democratic lawmakers.

A crowd of up to 800,000 people is expected to gather on the National Mall to witness Obama's second swearing-in, which will take place on the Capitol's red, white and blue bunting-draped west front. Roberts, who famously flubbed the oath of office that Obama took in 2009, will administer the oath on Monday.

Sunday's smaller ceremony was a function of the calendar and the Constitution, which says presidents automatically begin their new terms at noon on Jan. 20. Because that date fell this year on a Sunday ? a day on which inaugural ceremonies historically are not held ? organizers scheduled a second, public swearing-in for Monday.

Once the celebrations are over, Obama will plunge into a second-term agenda still dominated by the economy, which slowly churned out of recession during his first four years in office. The president will also try to cement his legacy with sweeping domestic changes, pledging to achieve both an immigration overhaul and stricter gun laws despite opposition from a divided Congress.

But for one weekend at least, Washington was putting politics aside. Obama called the nation's inaugural traditions "a symbol of how our democracy works and how we peacefully transfer power."

"But it should also be an affirmation that we're all in this together," he said Saturday, as he opened a weekend of inaugural activities at a Washington elementary school.

Obama and Biden were to address supporters Sunday evening at an inaugural reception.

The president planned to save his most expansive remarks for Monday's inaugural address to the crowd gathered on the Mall and millions more watching across the country and the world. Obama started working on the speech in early December and was still tinkering with it into the weekend, aides said.

Local officials were busy touching up Washington for all the hundreds of thousands of guests arriving for Monday's swearing-in. Work crews were trimming overgrown grass and trash from walkways along city underpasses, erecting first aid tents and setting up traffic detours. Swarms of tourists easily roamed city streets Sunday ahead of the pedestrian gridlock sure to come with Monday's full inaugural program.

The president's address will set the stage for the policy objectives he seeks to achieve in his second term, including speeding up the economic recovery, passing comprehensive immigration and gun control measures and ending the war in Afghanistan. Aides said Obama would save the specifics of those agenda items for his Feb. 12 State of the Union address.

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Associated Press writers Darlene Superville, Josh Lederman, Matthew Daly and Nancy Benac contributed to this report.

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Source: http://news.yahoo.com/obama-sworn-4-more-years-office-170309814--politics.html

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How To Free Yourself from Religious Sexual Shame | Musings by ...

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?As I grew into my adolescence, I began to associate sex with sin; I imagine this had to do with being surrounded in a conservative religion in my home, church and school. My attitude about sex and sexuality was that it was something that only married or sinful people engaged in.?? Other than that I did not have much information ? and because I was shy ? the only place I got information about sex and sexuality was from TV, magazines and books?.

This is a typical quote from a young woman who grew up in a conservative religious home.? When I hear these kinds of statements, I find myself asking, ?Why has religion failed to focus its teaching on the positive aspects of sexuality? ?For example, ?How can sex be a wonderful, healing, exciting part of life?? or ?What is the highest joy and beauty in the gift of sexuality and how do I cultivate that?? ?The religious mandate, ?No sex before marriage? (and nothing else) has meant most conservative religions offer negative threats while failing to offer any kind of actual guidance or education.? Yet by the age of 20, 80% of all people either are or have been sexually active. ?This is 6 to 8 years before the vast majority of people get married, if they are going to marry. ?Yet most people have been making sexual decisions for a decade by this point ? with little or no guidance or education.

I believe we need direction on how to understand and be in relationship with our sexual longing, desires, arousal and behaviors. And we need an?overt?sexual ethic that can guide us in building a paradigm that provides us with information ? biopsychosocial and spiritual (biological, psychological, social and spiritual). So, here are 12 ideas that serve as a sexual/spiritual/relationship lens with which to make informed sexual decisions ? and liberate yourself from sexual shame.

A healthy spiritual sexual ethic would be built on these 12 beliefs -

  1. You are a gift and your life is a gift ? your body, mind, soul, and relationships are woven into the gift of the human experience.
  2. You are God?s Beloved. Just the way you are ? right now ? every day. ?All creation is a gift (each person and all the earth that holds us) ? including each person you meet.
  3. You have a responsibility to care for yourself and all creation in a way that honors and supports the fullest potential of every individual.
  4. All children and adolescents have the right to learn in age appropriate?integrated?ways about life, relationships, responsibility and sexuality each year, throughout their education, by parents, teachers, extended family and family support educators. ?This education will help them make decisions that honor them.
  5. There is a spiritual mystery in sexuality, in love and in the purest human encounters. Because of this we make decisions in love, relationships and sex with care.
  6. You are hard wired for intimacy (deep safe attachment) and pleasure.
  7. Deep love, erotic experience, satiating sex ? will require you ?show up? with your heart wide open, eyes and body fully present/in the moment and willing to penetrate and be penetrated by your lover. If the body shows up without the soul, eyes and heart, you may find yourself experiencing a kind of sex that leaves you wanting.
  8. Love ? the action and the feeling ? can at times feel risky and vulnerable. It will require more courage than most encounters, yet be the most satisfying relational and sexual skill you acquire.
  9. Real sexual freedom is found inside a loving safe devoted partnership where you are truly free to be entirely yourself and to surrender to the power and mystery of love and sexual touch.
  10. When loving is fun and easy ? it is nourishment.
  11. When loving is difficult ? it is your teacher, your kiln, your crucible for becoming compassionate, wise, strong, centered and clear. It will grow you up ? help you to show up and shape up.
  12. On your death-bed you will count the ways you loved well as your most satisfying life measures.

If we taught children ? and if we guided ourselves ? to make relationship decisions (who we would open our heart to) and later our sexual decisions (who we would share intimate touch with) through these 12 values, our inner wisdom would guide us. We would become skilled in the gifts of caring, and skilled at discerning if others could care for us with love. We would still make mistakes ? but we would make less mistakes than we tend to make now.? We would have a foundation with which to examine decisions and a template to learn through.? We would know more of the love, intimacy and blessing God desires to give us through the gift of our sexuality.

About Tina Schermer Sellers

Tina Schermer Sellers is a recognized scholar in the integration of spirituality into a multitude of areas represented in family and career life. As a behavioral scientist, licensed family therapist, medical family therapist, and certified sex therapist, she specializes in helping to craft relationships, organizations and lives that flourish. In the area of sexuality, Tina has spent a career helping people discover what culture has failed to teach them about their bodies, their hearts, their capacity for intimacy and their erotic potential. This entry was posted in God, intimacy, Relationships, Sex, Sex, God, and The Church, sexual health, sexuality, spirituality and tagged body, desire, God, love, pleasure, sacred sexuality, sex and Christianity, sex and God, sex and religion, sexual desire, sexual shame, Tina Schermer Sellers. Bookmark the permalink.

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10 Secrets of Professional Writers Every Blogger Should Know ...

We all know good writing when we see it and we cringe when we see terrible writing. ?The worst thing is that the harder people try to write well, the worse their writing usually becomes.10 Secrets of Professional Writers Every Blogger Should Know

Here are 10 secrets of professional writers are guaranteed to improve your writing.

1. Avoid clich?s

But you know that, don?t you? And yet clich?s are more systemic and invasive then people imagine. A clich? is any idea or expression that has lost its force through overuse, to the point where it becomes meaningless and drab.

Here are some examples that I have found in recent blogs:

  • In this day and age
  • Never a dull moment
  • Given the green light
  • Rose to great heights
  • Calm before the storm

The problem, and the attraction, with clich?s is that they seem to say exactly what we want to say, so it is tempting to hang on to these tried and true expressions.

And yet, they will deaden your prose, make readers mentally sign off and expose you as an amateur. ?Everytime.

So avoid overused sayings (yes, I know, like the plague).

2. Write like you speak

Use a conversational tone. ?Really. And you don?t have to use complete sentences either.

Think of it this way; if you wouldn?t say it a casual conversation, think twice before you write it. ?A blog is a friendly chat that will inform and entertain your audience. It is not a lecture, an academic thesis or the opportunity to harangue your readers from your soapbox.

3. Talk to your reader like a friend

In real life you would use words like ??you? and ?I? so use them in your blog too, just like you would if you were chatting at a barbeque. This lesson comes hard to those who have spent a lot of time in academic writing (in fact most good writing lessons come hard to this group), but good writers love using you and I these days because it speaks directly to the reader.

4. Use anecdotes and case studies

These are little stories are the spice of blog. Facts only go so far and no one wants to read too many of them. People like stories about people and anecdotes humanize your information and make the reader care about the issue.

5. Parallelism

?This sounds technical but it just means a balance within sentences that have the same grammatical structure. Before you skip to the next point consider that according to Wikipedia using parallelism improves writing style and readability and makes sentences easier to process.

This is a typical example that I found in a blog.

?James likes to play soccer and hockey. He also likes to play a bit of tennis too.?

It reads better to say:

James enjoys soccer, hockey and tennis.

6. Getting down and dirty

Use adjectives sparingly.

When I ask my gen y students how they recognise good writing they often look perplexed (but then again, they tend to look perplexed most of the time). Finally a tentative hand will go up and a brave student will suggest that good writing is ?descriptive?. ?And by descriptive they mean lots of describing words ? or adjectives.

And a lot of people believe this.

But in a harsh kink of fate this leads to exactly the worst kind of writing ?the dreaded flowery prose.

Mark Twain said it best.

?When you see an adjective, kill it.?

This is what he actually said in a letter to D.W Bowser, 3/20/1880

I notice that you use plain, simple language, short words and brief sentences. ?. When you catch an adjective, kill it. No, I don?t mean utterly, but kill most of them?then the rest will be valuable. They weaken when they are close together. They give strength when they are wide apart. An adjective habit, or a wordy, diffuse, flowery habit, once fastened upon a person, is as hard to get rid of as any other vice.

7. But there?s more

There is another part of speech that will make your readers want to put their head in a vice. The dreaded adverb. In his acclaimed book, On Writing author Stephen King describes ?the road to hell as being paved with adverbs?.

Adverbs clutter your sentences and are considered a pitiable substitute for good writing.

To put it simply adverbs prop up poor verbs. Considering that verbs are the V8 engine of your sentence, using weak non-specific ones means you need an adverb to help it along, a bit like a Zimmer frame, and not a good look.

The famous example from every writing text is:

?The man walked wearily and laboriously up the hill?

The better way to write it is:

?The man trudged up the hill?

So, for example use the better verb skulked, instead of a phrase like ?moved suspiciously?. ?Think about using phrases such as ?teased mercilessly? when you could use taunted, or ?ran quickly? when you could use dashed or sprinted.

You get the point. Use specific verbs and nouns and use adverbs and adjectives sparingly. It sounds technical but with a small amount of thought you will supercharge you sentences and make your writing a pleasure to read.

8. Exclamation marks!

OMG! I know I don?t need to tell you this but exclamation marks can give your writing a gushing, effusive quality! ?They are mostly used ironically these days so unless you are an enthusiastic teenager, use with care.

9. Tighten up

Make your writing ?tighter? and more powerful by removing the extra words or phrases that don?t contribute to the meaning of your sentence. ?Look at your sentence; can you remove some words to make it more succinct? Less is better. Always.

10. Rant or reason?

If you want people to take you seriously develop evidence-based opinions. Why do you think as you do? Try to be able to back up your opinions with facts, research or statistics. Otherwise you may as well just get on a soapbox at the local park and rant.

Take home writing tip:

Think like a wise man, but express yourself like the common people. (W.B.Yeats)

Want more information about writing well for blogs?

Check out these experts:

Guest Author: Margaret Pincus?works in digital communications and also teaches writing/journalism at Griffith University. She blogs at bloghappy.com.au

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Source: http://www.jeffbullas.com/2013/01/22/10-secrets-of-professional-writers-every-blogger-should-know/

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Echo_Rose
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Hey Echo! :3 Can I reserve girl 1?

Call me... ?????or Hallowed... If you dare. :3

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Hallowed777
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Hello! yes you may, thank you for joining!

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Echo_Rose
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can i be the dad pleease :D

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remy6archer
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Could I reserve girl 3??? (: And, do you prefer for us to have face claims, or just regular photos?

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akjadestar
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yes you both can, thank you for joining

edit: i do prefer faceclaims

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